Thank you Letter 질문 입니다.

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    제임스 99.***.98.191 4299
    안녕하세요.

     

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    “위성 통신 인터뷰 후기 Satellite Engineer & Thank you Letter 질문 입니다.” 글의

    Thank you Letter 질문 입니다.

     

    공항에 도착 해서…

    Thank you Letter를 보내려고

    검색한 결과 별 내용을 못 찾고…

    그냥 아래 내용으로 보냈습니다.

     

    내용을 보시고 보완 할 사항을 알려 주셨으면 합니다.

    그리고, 관련 예문도 많은 공유 부탁 드립니다.

     

    아래…

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    Hello Bryan,

    Thank you for your time for interview.

    It was nice talking with you.

    I feel so impressive passion form you and your jobs.

    Also, You will find my passion for our Satellite Communication fields. I believe my background provides the necessary experience you require.

    I hope I will have the opportunity of reciprocating your kindness in the near future.

    Thank you for your time and all considerations!

    With my best regards,

    James

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    감사합니다.

     

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    • .. 67.***.130.30

      긍정적 측면은 아주 general하다는 것이구요..
      부정적 측면은 아주 general하다는 것입니다..

      제 느낌은 “googling해서 copy & paste했나?” 였습니다. :)

      • 제임스 108.***.229.75

        충고 해 주셔서 너무 감사합니다.

    • Green 155.***.247.16

      To me it looks like the one written by an elementary schooler…

      Here is a sample letter you can leverage:

      Dear XXX:

      I would like to thank you very much for taking your valuable time and energy to speak with me today regarding the position of XXXX at XXXX. The information I gained during our conversation has certainly enhanced my interest in joining your team at XXXXX.

      As you can find through my resume, I really desire to be an ambitious XXXX professional and want to seek a challenging but rewarding opportunity with XXXX.

      With my professional and educational experience, leadership competencies, and a strong work ethic, I feel confident that I have the principal qualifications and can make an immediate contribution as well as a long-term asset to the continued growth of the Company. A few examples of my accomplishments within XXXx area include:

      * Your key accomplishment 1
      * Your key accomplishment 2
      * Your key accomplishment 3
      * Your key accomplishment 4

      I am ready to dedicate myself to adding value to the Company, while deepening my technical and business expertise.

      Should you request any additional information for further consideration, please contact me via e-mail or by phone at (111) 111-1111.

      Thank you again for the most enjoyable interview. I look forward to joining your winning XXX team soon!

      Thanks and regards,

      Your Name

      • 제임스 108.***.229.75

        바로 제가 찾던 예문 입니다.
        너무 감사드립니다.

      • MS 76.***.170.206

        Your example is so useful. If you don’t mind, can I have your help to improve a quality of my cover letter (just one page but very professional). My email is mseokking@hotmail.com. Hopefully you have a great day!
        Best,
        MS.

    • gobo 205.***.36.12

      문법적인 사소한 오류가 오히려 좋았던 인상을 망칠수도 있다고 생각됩니다. 예를 들어 time for interview 라던가 I feel so impressive 같은 표현들은 좀 (많이) 어색하네요. 위의 Green 님의 예문을 토대로 *완전히* 다시 쓰셔야 할것 같습니다.

    • 제임스 108.***.229.75

      정성어린 충고에 감사드립니다.
      지금 다시 작성해서 보내겠습니다.