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    Jin 68.***.101.103 6904

    안녕하세요. 올해 12월에 석사 졸업예정인 학생입니다. 레쥬메에 대해 고수님들의 수정사항이나 고견을 듣고 싶네요. 개인 신상정보 보호로 대학이름은 제거햇습니다. 보안 관련 포지션으로 찾고 있는데 해당 잡 정보에 대해 혹시 알고 계시다면 답글 부탁드립니다.

    Objective : To obtain a position in the network security field.

    Education

    2003 – Present,
    MS., in Computer Science, expected December 2004,
    1995 – 2000
    B.S., in Computer Science.

    License & Skills:
    OCP DBA 7.3 as Oracle Certified Database Administrator
    Language: C, Visual Basic, and Visual C++, JAVA, SQL
    Platform: MS Windows NT 4.0, 2000,XP, Unix, Radhat Linux

    Certification:
    Advance Database Management with Oracle 8.0, April 2000, Hyundai IT
    Academy.

    Experience:

    – Access Bio, Inc., Monmouth Jct., New Jersey
    June 2004 to Present , System Administrator / Network Engineer
    •Implemented local LAN system with Windows Servers and Linux servers.
    •Designed the Inventory Management System for parts with MS Access DB.
    •Manage to backup the data in servers with Veritas 8.0 software.
    •Currently designing ERP for a small business company with Compeire 2.5 software.

    – NetSecure Technology, Inc., Seoul, South Korea
    May 2000 to April 2002 , Programmer / Network & Security Engineer
    Project Period : December 2001 to April 2002
    •Developed the module to support the integration between Network IDS and Firewall-1
    •Platform: Windows NT 4.0
    •Language: Visual C++
    Project Period: January 2001 to November 2001
    •Assisted with development of Network IDS(LAN 10/100M base) Software
    •Platform: Windows NT 4.0
    •Language: Visual C++
    May 2000 to December 2000
    •Co-Implemented for customers’ network security systems (LAN).
    •Configure and manage Hardware Firewall (NetScreen 100 and 1000) and Network IDS.
    •Provided more effective solutions for highly complex security systems.
    •Created / Maintained Database Server with Oracle 8.0.

    • SD.Seoul 137.***.209.130

      I would change to …….

      __________________
      Education:

      M.S., Computer Science, XXX University, Expected in December 2004
      B.S., Computer Science, YYY University, February 2000

      LicenseS & Skills:

      CertificationS:

      ExperienceS:

      – System Administrator / Network Engineer, June 2004 to Present,
      Access Bio, Inc., Monmouth Jct., New Jersey

      – Programmer / Network & Security Engineer, December 2001 to April 2002,
      NetSecure Technology, Inc., Seoul, South Korea
      _______________________
      Good luck.

    • tracer 63.***.102.35

      how about putting experiences first and then education?

    • NO 64.***.239.6

      objective or interesting areas
      education
      experience
      skills and awards
      references

    • Well 206.***.96.4

      It sounds right to me. Good Luck!

    • Jin 68.***.101.103

      댓글 달아주신 분께 감사함다..